Creative Piece
Author's Note: When I looked out the window in the L.A. room, I started thinking about how I really wanted spring to come. I used a lot of describing words in this piece so then the readers could try to get a feel of being in this wonderful world. I also tried to use more colons and semi-colons to help with my goals.
Sweet
smells of spring dance through the air. Delicate flowers sway in the
wind; the green grass dries from the midnight dew. Butterflies hover
above your head, while little bees picnic in the tulips. A tabby cat
lies on a freshly painted porch, bathing in the sunlight. Children and
their canine friends prance in the parks, celebrating the beautiful
spring day.
You
can hear music in the air as a car drives by with its windows rolled
down. Friendly gardeners tend to their crops: tomatoes, carrots, and so
many more. A family dashes by on their bikes as if they are in a race.
Little humming birds sing their happy tune to the budding trees, while
squirrels play in their branches.
People
gather around a fire enjoying the peaceful night, while children play
tag with their little flashlights. Animals of the night scurry around,
exploring the darkened landscape. Crickets start to chirp in the grass,
singing their song of joy. Children drag their sleepy feet as their
parents call them to bed.
Spring may feel oh so far away, but just you wait. It will be here to welcome you into a beautiful new world.
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